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[交流记录] 《众秘夜思》第2集:列提纲、明思路——8.12晚文字漫谈(端方)

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usb000 发表于 2014-8-18 23:09:09 | 显示全部楼层
 
公文写作百法例讲
每次只有等到12点左右才能静下心来,分享你们的疑惑和感悟,期待早日加入你们。
 
甘肃小秘 发表于 2014-8-19 09:56:21 | 显示全部楼层
 
老秘网虚拟稿费
标题分两部分,前半部分亮手段(做法),后半部分凸显成效。
 
beijiguang 发表于 2014-8-19 11:11:45 | 显示全部楼层
 
专业写文章
案例与论述结合,讲得比较到位,学习了。
 
zxb 发表于 2014-8-19 22:35:44 | 显示全部楼层
 
材料的骨架,也是我们通常所说的谋篇布局
 
毛迎新 发表于 2014-8-20 18:16:41 | 显示全部楼层
 
学习中,应该早点报到,长知识了。谢谢
 
墨家青木宇 发表于 2014-8-21 09:03:28 | 显示全部楼层
 
看得迷迷糊糊,自家水平太洼,跟着学习下
 
逸风 发表于 2014-8-21 09:15:58 | 显示全部楼层
 
刚才讨论的基础上,我想谈一谈关于列提纲的一点体会。我所理解的提纲就是动笔之前想好的内容,材料的骨架,也是我们通
 
杨雯 发表于 2014-8-21 09:57:31 | 显示全部楼层
 
讨论的很精彩,而且都是提到点子上的,值得学习
 
Sundy. 发表于 2014-8-21 10:51:01 | 显示全部楼层
 
刚刚大学毕业,初入职场,来向前辈们学习一下。
 
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